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Our fall shall rise in pain
None the less, our fate is drawn in stone
in time we will glare at mourn's skies
as that dreadful day will dawn.

Why are we punished for sins immemorial
A question not yet answered
as though god's doleful cries never cease,
we will continue to be assaulted and battered,
for our minds are bewildered by greed and lust.

I say we deserve as such,
death may not come upon as beautiful
nor shall it ever be
but as long as we make it last
life may carry out anew.

As the skies bellow and the grounds crumble,
remember all that our lives were lived
and that this dreadful world of war may rest.

tis' not unfair to us to be condemned
it was brought upon us forcefully
but as long as man is selfish,
so on shall our fate be sealed in time.

never the less my friend, never the less...
shall life be as miraculous as is it was conceived
and that the entire world needs to open it's minds and love
love not as an emotion but as a way of life.

understanding is the first step...
accepting should be the last.
:icondaver100:
Just keep it in mind and you'll eventually understand...
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:iconlilredwagon:
''but as long as man is selfish,
so on shall our fate be sealed in time.''

WELL thought and said/written!!

LRW is 'bettin' on 'selfish/man' - SADLY ... ~SIGHS~
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:icondaver100:
thanks you... and yeah... selfishness... big problem.
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:iconengelseele:
~EngelSeele Mar 14, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
But to keep in mind such a dreadful reminder leads many minds to ignore this very message. For the selfish will always be as such, and the world will never stop spinning until the very death of our kind. Then will we remember and regret all those things that makes us who we are.
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:icondaver100:
true, true...
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:iconsairionata:
WHOA. O.o I was like in a trance while reading this. It's really good! It's meaning is very deep, though, and it's given to everyone to understand it. But really intriguing, to say the least.

Thumbs up :iconthumbsupplz:
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:iconanimekiki:
thats a great poem david :)
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:icondaver100:
Just something I jotted down real fast.
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:iconanimekiki:
still i like it ^^
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